Editors Review Used with permission

I thought the storyline was wonderful and became very invested in the world, the science, the alien race, the characters, the changed culture, and so on. It was a fun idea and a well-thought-out world. The story is filled with some cool elements and great one-liners.

There is a perfect array of characters and I love that it was set in Australia. Not nearly enough fiction is set in this country, even though it makes such a fantastic setting!

I am especially impressed with the way you created multiple “bad guys” with varying personalities, agendas, and threat levels.

Lorin Willieam

www.thewritething.com.au

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